words and bonds

Sunday, May 14, 2006

answer

so yes that did happen. for better or worse i dont remember all the details, or what provoked the gentleman. i dont believe the episode bothers me, but i also dont know the mood that comes across in the words. maybe a critique from you would help. at this point its another story going in the vault.

1 Comments:

At 5:35 PM, Blogger ellis&lauren said...

i think the poem is very good because its visually disturbing yet the tone IS apathetic. how come the episode doesnt bother you? it bothers me...but maybe because i dont know what happend... and the poem leaves it vague...the part about covering the girl and getting called a creep, a pervert. was she ok? what did he do to her?
it seems so unlikely...so random that that would happen to you on the street. maybe i need to reread the poem... hold on.. ill post there.

 

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